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2012-07-10 20:08:28
http://www.vsread.com/article-231185.html 3 楼 文友：凌翔云越高山 2012-07-10 08:08:12
《花朵》韵味稍显不足。《野花二首·其一》第三句“臭”字待推敲！问好！
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2012-07-10 20:12:25
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2012-07-10 20:24:22
http://www.vsread.com/article-231188.html 5 楼 文友：凌翔云越高山 2012-07-10 08:23:59
问候老师！想当年也乃性情中人！才情如流水，滚滚付东海！欣赏！
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2012-07-12 09:36:24
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2012-07-12 09:41:41
http://www.vsread.com/article-231221.html 7 楼 文友：凌翔云越高山 2012-07-12 09:41:22
欣赏！文由心生！但韵味稍显不足。押韵还是值得推敲！问好！
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2012-07-12 09:45:47
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2012-07-12 10:09:37
http://www.vsread.com/article-231229.html 3 楼 文友：凌翔云越高山 2012-07-12 10:08:55
怨何深？恨何长？小妹离异，如桃花飘零。东君不惜，风吹雨打；香消玉损，旧梦牵萦。叹当年：风华正茂，人比桃花，争献殷情，春心萌动，娇羞难拒，轻易得到，轻易抛弃。一声长叹！其由更谁知？
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2012-07-12 10:12:40
http://www.vsread.com/article-231233.html 2 楼 文友：凌翔云越高山 2012-07-12 10:12:27
欣赏第二首！第一首又是久旱又是政通民和让人费解！问好！
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2012-07-12 10:16:53
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2012-07-12 10:32:03
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2012-07-12 10:34:14
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2012-07-12 10:37:52
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2012-07-12 18:32:47
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2012-07-12 18:39:07
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2012-07-12 18:47:46
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2012-07-12 18:55:08
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2012-07-12 19:03:53
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2012-07-12 19:06:57
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2012-07-12 19:14:01
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2012-07-12 19:21:46
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