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2012-11-26 00:50:26
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=273956 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 12:49:54
唉,这社会,这世道,这世风,摇几下头罢了.
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2012-11-26 22:28:16
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=274443 3 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:27:52
养老的问题不单单是家庭的问题,也可以说是社会的问题。
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2012-11-26 22:34:37
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=274286 1 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:34:12
对诗的品读很深入,读到了诗人的情怀,赞.
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2012-11-26 22:37:27
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=274481 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:37:04
作品很沉着,凝练的文字表达,写出了韵味.
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2012-11-26 22:40:22
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=273989 3 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:39:31
节奏感明快的诗意,喜欢这样的手笔.
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2012-11-26 22:42:50
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=273909 3 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:42:23
借画抒情,乘物游心,很灵动的诗意,欣赏.
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2012-11-26 22:45:33
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=273880 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:44:54
"日月千帆皆过眼,心怡无意筑芳枝。"
唔,好句!好句!
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2012-11-26 22:48:09
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=273879 4 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:47:40
作品在遣词上很有功力,欣赏,赞.
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2012-11-26 22:51:56
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=273817 5 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:51:26
"林间闲煮酒,曲韵意绵长。"与"竹案闲煮酒,悠然品茶香。"两句类似却意境不同.欣赏了.
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2012-11-26 22:53:42
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=273546 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:53:22
呵呵,这样的古诗词读起来也蛮有意思的哦,顶了..
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2012-11-26 22:55:37
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=273497 3 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-26 10:55:11
文字清丽,深得宋词的韵味,赞一个.
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2012-11-28 00:20:55
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=232483 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-28 12:19:49
些些的文字,一片真诚的情怀,诗歌的写意令人动容。欣赏了。
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2012-11-28 00:25:13
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=274704 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-28 12:24:52
唔,我觉得,这主要还是发展问题,意识流问题.
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2012-11-28 00:27:41
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=274719 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-28 12:27:13
身高不高,必须有实力,身高很高,同样要有水准,这是一定的.
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2012-11-28 00:30:15
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=274926 3 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-28 12:29:47
风往脖子里灌,想想都觉得冷啊.
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2012-11-28 00:32:59
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=274900 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-28 12:32:37
是呢,往事如烟啊,中考,那些年,那些情怀.
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2012-11-28 00:35:52
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=274888 3 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-28 12:35:27
我想起家乡的河,现在啊,鱼啊虾啊的,快灭绝了.
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2012-11-28 23:10:14
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=275337 1 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-28 11:09:41
这样的解读很精细,以小见大,可见作者有做学问的严谨精神。赞。
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2012-11-29 00:17:18
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=275391 1 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-29 12:16:55
一篇有写意的美文,祝愿能在征文活动中夺奖。
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2012-11-29 00:27:28
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=275401 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2012-11-29 12:26:33
这个影评中,作者提到了戏剧,却没有对戏剧和影片作出深刻的比较,使得这个作品有些不饱满。加油!
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