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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-28 15:23:16

人比人该死,货比货该扔.有意思的说法.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-28 15:22:12

文字很清新,有一定的意境,欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-28 15:18:54

一般来说，婆媳如水火，老公夹在中间左右都不是。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-28 15:19:54

选择,总是需要理性,还有果断.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-28 15:21:19

情真意切的篇章.赏读了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 16:03:50

诗意的栀子花,美若栀子花.

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5 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 16:01:54

许多精彩的诗句,摘鉴一下.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 16:00:31

一种旷达的田园情怀.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:59:23

心起微澜,诗题很细腻.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:58:04

心思细腻的述说,一种生活的情怀.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:48:33

诗歌写的有意象,读过.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:49:49

诗作有许多出彩之处,学习了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:50:53

很精致的一个表达,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:52:02

诗歌拯救不了世界和人类,但是它能散发思想的光芒.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:53:03

意境鲜明,细致的写意.读过.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:54:03

细节的写意比较具有魅力,喜欢.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:54:54

故乡是内心深处的永远的背景.

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:55:43

孩子,是时代的一种沉重啊.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-29 15:57:00

梦里梦外,都是生活的影射.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-05-31 15:32:07

很淡然的手笔,文字很美,欣赏了.