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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-09 15:34:16

另人耳目一新的诗篇,欣赏.

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6 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-10 16:13:54

假如有天使借给我轻盈的翅膀/我必将撕破喉咙，动情的飞翔/歌唱生活的美好和生命的俊朗/

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10 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-09 16:52:35

立在四海的中央/遥望生命之舟未来的航向/我们该把剩余的时光/扬帆成怎样一种动人的模样/ 

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6 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-09 16:24:15

另人警醒的诗篇,顶了. 

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7 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-09 16:22:33

再读此诗歌,却有了另一种感受和意味. 

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5 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-09 16:20:38

十三年草长莺飞/您看见蓬蓬远春，采采流水/终于醉成红叶一枚/ 

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9 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-09 16:18:16

以笔为马，我要纵马渴慕已久的草原/挥举一个诗人积蓄三千年的光芒/照亮折断劲风草，和啃碎青草的羊/ 

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:12:12

淡雅的情绪,淡雅的文笔,给人淡雅的阅读享受.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:13:41

有味道的文字,欣赏了.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:15:31

发自内心的情感写意,让人感触很深.欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:16:52

有深情,也有痴痴的忧伤在里面.读过.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:18:29

掌声,或许的最好的理解.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:19:41

思维活跃,物象优美,不错的文字.加油.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:21:03

文字尽见江南的风采,欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:22:39

像是作品的序哦,不过也写的不错.赞.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:24:16

眼泪都是情感之物，得流得有点价值。

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:27:51

古之写手,仅沽名,今之墨客,沽名掘利.所以古人留下经典,今人生产快餐.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:30:03

貂蝉,在一部男人的血腥游戏中留下了一抹人性的情感.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:31:39

钱都是王八蛋，可是我们谁也离不开钱过生活。挣干净钱，日子紧巴巴的；挣黑心钱，又良心不安。该如何是好？

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:37:05

这组诗歌富有新意,些许诗句令人警醒.