http://www.vsread.com/article-336424.html
4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:38:00

好诗,有几个句子值得玩味.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336429
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:38:39

感觉这个诗有点轻了些.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336486
4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:39:53

这叫坐享人间烟火.呵呵,不错的诗作,欣赏啦.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336182
5 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:42:40

细腻的写意蕴藏着宏大的情感.欣赏.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336219
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:44:36

细读作品,觉得古韵很浓,笔力很好,赞.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336268
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:46:17

比较玩味的诗作,顶一下.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336303
4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:47:26

最贴切生活的诗和歌.读过.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336063
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:49:03

很豁达的诗句,喜欢.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336021
7 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-11 22:50:28

一首好的诗总能把读者的情感荡漾起来.欣赏.顶一下.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336537
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:23:14

有点说相声的味道哦.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336038
3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:27:18

与世无争,明月清风.这就是境界啊.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336396
3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:24:32

口头禅运用也很有意思啊.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336225
3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:26:01

不错的故事,赏读了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335717
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:32:56

感觉内容不深啊.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335556
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:34:01

集资出书,也许有意义,

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335894
3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:30:43

这就是稳拿个匪啊,有点意思.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336940
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:35:50

开水还是这么便宜.那时侯去买开水,都是在床角落里寻找到的.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336690
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:38:13

月夜情怀.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=337128
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:39:41

从诗里发现不少好诗句,摘录下来把玩.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=336930
3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-06-14 08:37:24

就像赌高考,其实输了也无妨,人生路有很多嘛.赌能激发青春.