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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-18 15:47:39

选择是必须的,迫不得已的,但是遗憾多少也是有的,遗憾有时候也是一种美丽呢.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=345653
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-18 15:50:31

呵呵,春雨老师倒是一针见血,道出了要害.我也买过一段时间的彩票,现在不玩了,觉得上彩票的套了.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-18 15:51:59

买彩票只能买一张废纸,还不如买包烟抽,好歹还能提神,冒冒烟.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-18 15:54:26

都几年了,买老鼠药的都换了招牌和药性,为什么我们的城管一点都每进化?????

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-18 15:55:45

自己也可以煮啊,放点八角桂皮,茶叶什么的,效果也不错.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:10:15

我们都是用肉眼在审视这个人间万物.

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5 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:11:10

优美的写意,欣赏了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=345701
4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:12:11

去年总是那么年轻,这个诗题真好,让人回味.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:13:25

太阳也是一个人的轴心吧.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=345921
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:14:52

接近蓝的意境.好句,好句!

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:16:02

这个诗句也让人眼前一亮,诗句出彩,诗歌也就出彩了.欣赏.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=345944
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:17:41

感觉这个作品写的也可以,读了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=345945
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:18:39

梦还在,应该感谢.不错的诗题,喜欢.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=345985
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:19:42

故乡让你缱绻,母亲让你想流泪.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:20:50

非常理性的一组诗句,耐味.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=346039
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:22:33

两个作品都写意沉重,给人深思.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=346053
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-19 15:25:10

陌路同途,殊途同归,唔,是有必然的联系.欣赏了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=346663

4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-22 16:08:34

是个好地方啊,就怕开发后人心就便了... 

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=346664

3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-22 16:09:38

山水乃地上之文章啊,欣赏美文, 

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=346718

1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-22 16:10:58

非常秀丽的写意,欣赏如画佳作.