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清风淡雅

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【荷塘絮语】挥不去的情愁

2014-08-08 21:58:36

                                                                                      

                                                                                       挥不去的情愁
                                                                                       离别的路口
                                                                                       你轻抚着我的头
                                                                                       柔声地说
                                                                                       我要看着你先走
 

 

                                                                                       我转身挥挥手
                                                                                       我不敢回头
                                                                                       我害怕
                                                                                       害怕走不出你那双深情的眼眸


                                                                                      美丽的邂逅
                                                                                      为何会是一曲离殇的前奏
                                                                                      总把一卷思念
                                                                                      织成眉间那缕挥不去的清愁

                                                                                      红尘烟雨中
                                                                                      相思弥漫了萧瑟的秋
                                                                                      你可知道,那片片落红
                                                                                      就是我为你捧在手心里的温柔

                                                                                     你曾经说过
                                                                                     待到桃花再次开透
                                                                                     你就会回来
                                                                                     牵着我的手共赴天长地久

                                                                                     风雨黄昏后
                                                                                     看时光缓缓的流走
                                                                                     灯火阑珊处不见你的回眸
                                                                                     只有在断桥边一季一季地摘红豆

                                                                                     眼中的泪
                                                                                     跌落成你指尖的轻柔
                                                                                     页页小字香笺里
                                                                                     写就了多少红尘中的爱恨悠悠

                                                                                     岁月的渡口
                                                                                     依然有我不变的守候
                                                                                     下一个月上柳梢头时
                                                                                      你可否会与我相约黄昏后

 

清风淡雅

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2014-08-08 21:59:19
原创首发,欢迎指正!谢谢!
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2014-08-09 23:38:59
祝淡雅早日走出情愁的阴影,沐浴阳光,快乐生活!!
云端轻舞

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2014-08-10 07:22:17
我祝淡雅早日走出情愁的阴影,沐浴明天的阳光,快乐幸福地生活!
清风淡雅

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2014-08-10 08:44:49
谢谢格纹文友的关心。淡雅慢慢地会走出来的。期待那一天!
烟云墨雨飞

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2014-08-10 10:05:53
相约黄昏后那个时刻,希望早早到来!祝福淡雅!
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2014-08-10 20:12:43

美丽的邂逅,相约黄昏后;深情的眼眸,悠悠的情愁。

欣赏!赞!

潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:27:40
       挥不去的情愁
                                                                                       离别的路口
                                                                                       你轻抚着我的头
                                                                                       柔声地说
                                                                                       我要看着你先走 
潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:28:01
     我转身挥挥手
                                                                                       我不敢回头
                                                                                       我害怕
                                                                                       害怕走不出你那双深情的眼眸


潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:28:20
   美丽的邂逅
                                                                                      为何会是一曲离殇的前奏
                                                                                      总把一卷思念
                                                                                      织成眉间那缕挥不去的清愁
潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:28:42
 红尘烟雨中
                                                                                      相思弥漫了萧瑟的秋
                                                                                      你可知道,那片片落红
                                                                                      就是我为你捧在手心里的温柔

潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:29:02
你曾经说过
                                                                                     待到桃花再次开透
                                                                                     你就会回来
                                                                                     牵着我的手共赴天长地久

潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:29:25
 风雨黄昏后
                                                                                     看时光缓缓的流走
                                                                                     灯火阑珊处不见你的回眸
                                                                                     只有在断桥边一季一季地摘红豆

潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:29:47
     眼中的泪
                                                                                     跌落成你指尖的轻柔
                                                                                     页页小字香笺里
                                                                                     写就了多少红尘中的爱恨悠悠

潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:30:10
 岁月的渡口
                                                                                     依然有我不变的守候
                                                                                     下一个月上柳梢头时
                                                                                      你可否会与我相约黄昏后
潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:30:33
唯美的文字!
潮仙

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2014-09-14 10:30:53
缠绵的情丝!
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2014-09-14 10:31:10
欣赏问好!
清风淡雅

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2014-09-21 18:50:06
回复17楼的老师,感谢你的来访和鼓励!问好!
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