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5 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 08:21:49

 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 08:23:50

 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 08:30:01

那场风是真的醉了吧/　 一霎那爆怒的把酒瓶摔在地上/　 黑黑的脸庞忽然大笑把天幕撕成碎花/
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表现手法很精致的一句.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 08:32:32

可以感受到诗歌里的那种甜美.喜欢.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 08:55:24

诗歌是一种救赎，不管是情感，情怀还是情义的，都可以是。好诗再读。关注。

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:03:17

用人生来经营一首诗歌,有意思,有意义.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:06:13

淋漓的文字写意,意象格外清晰.欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:13:32

这来自深情的诗意的表白,令人动容.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:15:01

非常有诗意的表达,灵动的文字让人欣喜.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:16:34

有韵律,有韵味,这便是一首诗歌的可读之处.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:21:48

文字精致,很洗练的几个诗作,欣赏.

 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:23:36

野菊花的芬芳,让人有一种感动.欣赏好诗作.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:33:09

美丽的些些思绪飘荡,文字很清秀,感受很圆润.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:38:11

很诚挚的诗篇,诗写的情感丰满,炽热的情怀.欣赏.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-04 09:40:33

真是好桃花,娇艳的桃花,化作灵性的诗意来.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-05 11:45:27

 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-06 11:59:12

 

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-07 12:06:23

 

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-07 12:08:32

 

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-07 12:09:45