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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 12:05:20

 

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 12:07:38

 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 12:09:48

 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 12:11:27

 

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 09:53:32

这个诗作不错，有点歌唱的韵味，欣赏。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 09:55:05

诗句写意深沉,有意境,值得细细品读.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 09:57:55

第二首的押韵重复性的比较多，伤、望、有点多哦。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 09:59:25

趁月光朦胧，七夕未到/　 陶醉山水，吟诗作画/ 甩袖长卷爱恋，胜却繁华无数/
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欣赏这个诗句!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:01:05

在情感的旋涡里关于情感的理性的思考,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:03:03

诗写很清美，一种真挚的情怀在诗人的内心升腾起来，欣赏。

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:04:16

可以感受到诗人的那种宽阔的思维和丰富的情感,好诗歌!

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:16:25

诗写的有内涵，吸收诗句的一些营养以兹学习，再读。

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:17:39

文字平实,期待更多好文.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:19:02

书写一个光辉的形象，文字扎实，欣赏，问好。

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:20:32

品文精致,文笔老练,好文章,学习了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:21:53

诗作深邃，透着些许哲理，引人思考。

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:23:03

三楼的文友猜的应该是对的了,佩服！

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:24:28

脉脉抒情，文字恬美，饱含感情的诗句。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:36:43

诗作落笔轻盈，诗句很友意境的美感，赞了。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2012-12-11 10:38:03

深沉而又内敛的述说,文字透着理性.欣赏.