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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-22 16:59:38

情绪的散,诗意的散,但意境不散.欣赏.. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:32:49

每个人心中的夏如此的不同,每个人的夏总有如此细腻的记忆. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:33:45

说到莲,不觉一身清凉. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:35:01

围城里美好的东西毕竟还是有很多很多. 

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5 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:37:43

游心的情怀一片,欣赏美文. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:39:09

赏荷,也是一种意境,有着自己的心境总是高超的. 

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:41:00

击壤,唔,挺美好的乐器呢. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:44:19

作者笔下的童年让我想起鲁迅的文章来. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:44:19

作者笔下的童年让我想起鲁迅的文章来. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:45:53

国家制定"常回家看看"的法律,看来是正确的,不孝也是违法啊. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:47:17

文中的雨,是好雨,文中的事物,是真实存在事物,美好的事物. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:48:28

炎炎夏季,读到如此感情真挚的亲情篇,顶了. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:49:28

慢,才能体会到人生的悠然啊. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:51:20

一条路,两边的风景是楼宇喧嚣好还是草木青青好?这值得选择. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:53:10

喜欢,是自己的,喜欢也是有光芒的. 

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:55:41

人生中,总有一些老师值得我们去怀念,去信仰. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 15:56:49

美好的诗景,一片悠然的心境. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 16:01:28

唔,对于爱情,只求幸福依存... 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 16:02:31

诗笔很好,有些句子值得细细回味. 

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 16:03:51

诗作很好,写意了很多的美,欣赏..