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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 16:05:29

<冰蓝夏浓>可是一首歌?觉得听清凉的. 

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-23 16:06:29

有点<归田园居>的意境,欣赏了. 

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:03:24

没有房子最好,生时以世界为家,死了,葬身大海.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:05:08

没有电扇的年代,夏天很凉,在这空调横行的时代,夏天更热.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:07:44

过往的美好和忧伤终归为美好的回忆.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:09:52

庄子曰,静而圣,动而王.动的时候是农夫,静的时候是文人.两全其美.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:11:04

几许让人欢喜的往事纷纷.欣赏了.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:12:17

好梦,好梦,难得梦中有一个美好的世界.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:14:21

头发是很重要的形象之一,但是一个人要是内在好,头发就显得次要啦.有追求总是好的.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:15:40

花事弄心情,欣赏美作.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:16:56

淫雨的淫,应该有个雨字头吧?

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:18:01

隔着窗听雨,可有另一种意境.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:20:42

这个时代正是国人心灵混乱的时代,但愿这是一种过渡.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:24:47

以人为本，天地灿烂,以此为题,很大气.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:25:50

心中有爱,一路花开,不错的题笔,意义积极.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:26:38

生活,其实越简单,越好.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:28:13

养花不丧志,品花志更明.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:30:28

樱桃不悲哀,毕竟成熟过.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-25 16:31:17

甚是一弯好月,喜欢美文.