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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 14:49:22

我混江山五年了,觉得江山网不错.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 14:50:52

文字轻盈曼妙,富有诗意,喜欢,顶了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 14:52:39

母爱会一直在,冥冥中护佑着孩子.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 14:54:13

构思精湛,落笔厚重,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 14:55:34

专科没什么不好,只要努力,出来一样能有好人生.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 14:59:09

三十而立,我也快奔三了,觉得也要总结总结.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 15:01:56

文笔锐利,直指这个时代.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 15:03:00

不错的文字,很开阔的笔力,欣赏.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 15:07:00

诗句有精彩之处,欣赏了.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 15:08:03

厚重的一组,诗意绵长,欣赏,顶.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 15:09:06

在荷中的一片遐想,思绪纷纷,不错的抒情,赞.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 15:11:13

着笔洗练,却蕴含美妙的情感的东西,读过.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 15:12:16

绵绵悠悠的抒情的歌,绵绵悠悠的情感流露.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-07-30 15:13:21

小诗温存,适合缱绻.欣赏.