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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-21 16:55:51

大自然的美,我们永远也采撷不及.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-21 16:56:50

优美的文字,写的也很清澈.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-21 16:57:43

文字深入肺腑,让人动容.欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-21 16:58:27

想起鲁迅写的社戏了...

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:20:47

这来自生活里的小诗意,小风情,喜欢.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:22:40

心事,性喜潮湿,遇到雨,便开始发芽,长根,开花.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:24:36

自己饲养的歌曲最耐听,自己饲养的月亮最柔美,自己饲养的笑容最温暖.

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:27:25

诗意甚是开阔,欣赏了.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:29:07

诗人的作品总是给人一种阅读的享受.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:31:47

这些朴实的物象在诗人笔下却是这般充满灵性的诗意美.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:32:44

草有着无与伦比的千古绝唱.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:34:06

的确,这坦然的诗情,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:35:59

诗情悠柔的文字,赏读了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:39:07

清晰的物象充满诗人丰富的臆想,酿就这回味无穷的诗意.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:41:12

诗写的有力量,有光芒.欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:42:44

伤怀的写意,沉美的文字,读过.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:44:16

江南的一些雨,雨中的一些历史,不错的写意,欣赏.

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:47:00

花编对各种物象的调度可谓信手,更另人喜欢的是,这信手拈来的物象在词语间发挥着意义关系.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:48:52

文字甚美,遣词上也比较有讲究.欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:50:59

重庆,也是火炉城之一呢.