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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:51:54

美好的乡村风景,让漂泊的人,想家了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:54:26

发人思考的文章.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=355074
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:55:49

年少的那份涉初的激情,人生难得那分少年情.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:56:51

总有一些人,不算好,却留在记忆深处.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-23 15:57:48

那美好的年代,那难忘的露天电影...

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:32:08

有气势的一个作品,欣赏,.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:33:52

这些忧伤的美好的心绪,读了.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:34:53

臆想很新奇,有意思的精彩诗作.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:36:48

喜欢诗人这语词之间意义关系的诗写技巧,美不甚收.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:40:17

饱含感情的诗写,欣赏.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:41:45

美好时光的历程诗写,有诗情的作品.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:43:09

每个作品后的顿号似乎没什么意义啊,个见.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:44:19

诗写有着秋意和美感,欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:45:58

诗人进入的时光可远远不止二段.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=355444
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:48:00

信手皆诗意,可见诗人的灵感之富足,灵意之宽广.欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:49:53

在历史中抒怀和感知,这厚重的诗写令人景仰.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:51:18

诗写有着感情的细腻,不错的文字,欣赏了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=355433
3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-24 15:52:54

流畅的述说,温情的诗写,欣赏.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=355713
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-25 16:41:03

问好诗人,觉得你富有诗写的潜质,关注.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=355708
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-25 16:42:46

这是一首非常令我回味的诗篇,有些诗写符合读者的内心.