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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 15:55:40

诗作很朴实,很实在.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356861
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 15:56:36

她说的很有诗意,很含蓄,好作品.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356923
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 15:57:39

有心绪的东西,诗写很激昂.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356928
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 15:59:57

诗写如果更稳练一些会更好.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356932
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 16:02:39

这个诗作的确写的到位,顶一下.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356931
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 16:03:38

最后一节非常出彩,感谢带来好诗!

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356933
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 16:04:30

熟悉的诗人,第一次编你的诗作,幸甚!

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356936
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 16:06:34

欢迎诗人来到江山,期待更多精彩呈现.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356937
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 16:08:14

秋天又到了,从诗人的诗意里流露出来.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=356941
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-30 16:11:06

诗人这意境和诗意实在是一种享受.顶!

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=357156
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-31 15:58:03

也是读诗人徐志摩的一生,好诗作,欣赏.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=357171
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-31 15:59:34

小编斗胆了,为诗作做了些许的排版修改,但愿没改变诗人的诗意表达.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=357174
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-31 16:01:04

诗歌本身很好的,但请诗人今后注意一下行数,系统诗歌要求在24行以上的.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=357176
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-31 16:02:05

伤感的诗写就像伤感情歌一样,总是动人.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=357187
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-08-31 16:02:57

难得诗人的发现,善于摄取题材.