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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:47:00

期待诗人的更多精彩作品.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362451
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:49:12

有些片断似乎也和我的记忆有共同之处,童年的美好和丰富不朽啊.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362454
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:51:08

向诗人的雄放的诗写学习.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362456
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:52:10

好多句子真是不错,借鉴几个.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362462
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:53:06

系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html />　　 也问好老乡!

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362465
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:54:12

问候诗人,期待更多精彩.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362359
3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:55:41

诗句很精致工整,欣赏了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362365
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:56:32

有深刻的内容,这很难得,欣赏.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362370
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:57:49

诗写的情怀,可以感受到,顶了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362371
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:58:42

有风格的诗写和文笔,欣赏.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362376
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 16:59:37

诗题很好,写意甚静美.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362345
5 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 17:00:59

这抒情的 意境面积很大呢,喜欢.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362346
3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 17:01:58

诗意积极向上,诗风很美,学习.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=362349
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-20 17:02:56

简单的诗句见干净的诗意,欣赏了.