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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:25:56

诗作的风格婉雅,富有宋词的精彩神韵,喜欢!

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:27:31

这诗写的燕子,有神有韵,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:28:27

有内涵的诗作,甚为精炼,欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:29:22

诗作诗写的很丰富,赞一个先.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:30:10

诗人一来江山就带来了精彩,幸甚!

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:31:45

鱼在盘子里想家,我在餐桌前摩梭着味蕾.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:33:03

诗写细腻,有江南的风采.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:34:44

诗人的情感抒发的真挚的,不能否认,这也是诗写的必要点.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:35:45

有些诗句很美妙,有学习的营养价值.欣赏了.

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-02 16:37:06

浪花也是花,花有花的精彩和风韵.赞.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-03 15:51:08

诗人富有诗写的潜力,关注!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-03 15:52:15

前半节把山写神韵了,欣赏..

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-03 15:53:55

不错的诗作,读第一遍的时候居然没读出内在,惭愧.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-03 15:55:19

给作品做了一些排版的修改,请诗人今后注意一下啦,感谢奉献优美的诗意.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-03 15:56:12

我觉得这才是诗人的风格.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-03 15:57:47

这丰腴的秋天的诗意,叫人喜欢.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-03 15:59:07

细腻的诗写更能打动人.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-03 16:01:51

一首好诗的酝酿离不开诗人深入生活的多感和细悟.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=358175
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:47:40

对诗人的才情表示关注.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=358171
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:48:50

诗写很真诚,问好诗人!