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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:42:35

诗人请注意一下,系统诗歌栏目要求作品押韵和24行以上,问好熟悉的文友!

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=359481
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:45:37

问好诗人,感谢呈现精彩的诗歌!

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:47:02

这些句子令人回味不已!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:48:02

押韵有点乱,请诗人注意一下哦.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:49:18

喜欢这诗句的精彩演绎.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:50:21

哎,我写诗就总也不会押韵.羡慕啊!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:52:02

一首作品,换韵有点过了,诗人请注意一下哦.问好!

http://www.vsread.com/article-359822.html
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:03:03

青春中有诗歌，生命中就增添一份华彩；诗歌中有青春，诗歌就增添一份激情。来自诗人的创造，彰显诗歌的荣光。为诗作献分，期待更多精彩呈现。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:12:14

不错的诗作,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:13:36

感悟挺独到的,欣赏这个作品.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:14:47

一个很好的诗题!

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:16:47

诗本身很好的,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:17:56

诗写的有意蕴,喜欢.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:19:02

又是一组好诗,神韵十足,顶一个.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:20:04

诗是我们每一天的节日!这个说法甚美妙,也赞!

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-11 17:21:55

古人有云:文章是案头之山水,山水乃地上之文章.好诗篇.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-12 17:03:50

系统诗歌要求押韵的,诗人请今后注意哦.欢迎来到江山!

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=360338
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-12 17:05:26

押韵似乎有点乱了，诗人加油哦~

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=360336
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-12 17:07:00

请注意一下诗人,作品押韵似乎有点乱,问好!

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=360334
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-12 17:08:24

好作品,问好熟悉的诗人.