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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:50:03

系统诗歌栏目有押韵要求,诗人今后可注意一下.问好诗人.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:50:59

熟悉的诗人,诗写的意境又进了一层,顶.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:51:46

又是一篇不错的作品，欣赏。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:53:09

同意编辑的按写,是这个理解.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:54:14

诗写的四季,别有意趣.欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:55:30

朋友的酒的那种感觉,被诗人捕捉到了,我就表达不出来.赞.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:56:30

最后几句经典,喜欢.

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:58:37

豪情的诗人也有性情的美.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-04 16:59:28

这个秋蝉的诗写也很有味,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:03:41

沉静的述说内心的一种情怀.欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:04:51

宁静的述说,微澜内心一片.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:06:01

诗写的细腻之美,欣赏.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:09:31

这柔情蜜意的诗写,赏读.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:10:33

简单的诗题,在诗人笔下尽出美丽的诗意.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:11:32

我是我自己的陌生人/ 我是我自己的太阳/
好句!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:12:22

诗句很美妙,灵动,学习了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:13:14

丰富的诗写,诗意饱满,欣赏.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=358441
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:14:04

诗意里一片汪洋的红,好诗!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-05 16:14:39

这个诗写也不错,有美的东西.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=359250
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 16:53:33

诗人的现代诗也流露着诗人的古韵风韵.欣赏.