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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 16:54:25

呵呵,我是黄石阳新的呢,问好诗人!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 16:55:43

最喜欢后两首,很玩味.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 16:57:00

这文笔的美令人赏心.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 16:58:18

文风有新意,令人悦目.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 16:59:34

这个诗作甚好，再读一次。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:00:35

诗有意味,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:01:50

有诗意在里面,就是诗的.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:02:34

这个作品有美感,诗意不错,欣赏.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:05:04

优美的抒情笔墨，欣赏。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:06:13

有主旨的作品总是好的.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:07:49

文笔不错,诗写有待洗练,问好诗人!

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:08:42

一组有意境的诗写,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:09:39

太阳升起，心就不会落寞.诗题很美.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:12:17

这往事里的寂情。。。

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:13:20

我是我自己的天堂,好句.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-08 17:14:29

诗写似乎不完整哦,加油!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:37:27

系统诗歌栏目要求押韵的,请诗人今后注意哦.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:39:03

恕小编斗胆了,给作品改了诗题.欢迎来到江山.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:39:53

在诗词之间自在人生,这多好!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-09-09 16:41:05

诗人诗写应该多斟酌,争取出精品!