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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:25:04

这首久远的歌,在风中复活,飘荡.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:26:58

精致的一首小诗,诗意厚实,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:28:22

乡土气息弥漫的诗篇,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:29:32

遣词精致的一首小诗,韵律甚美.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:30:56

最后一句挺有诗意,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:34:20

诗海茫茫于生活之中，大日子小日子，酸甜苦辣涩，一秒之郁闷，百年之孤独，千古之忧愤，乘物游心，各揣一腔情怀。

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:48:50

这手榴弹,埋藏了厚重的历史.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:48:50

这手榴弹,埋藏了厚重的历史.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:51:09

干净的梦境.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:55:14

多磨练,可是宝贵的经验积累呢.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:56:23

一次登山，登出的是爱心，登出的生活的体验，登出的是气概和精神。
1楼的评论很经典.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:57:02

很好的文笔了,有内涵的文章,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-22 16:58:05

文笔朴实,内容很深刻,欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-23 16:28:36

天气是开始冷了,太阳不烈.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-23 16:29:38

有生命方有诗歌，生命因诗歌而美丽.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-23 16:30:34

假如人的生命初期就有记忆,的确是好啊.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-23 16:31:34

额,想吃烤肉了...

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-23 16:32:16

这秋日的情怀,安静,静美.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-23 16:34:09

我也有一个淘书的好地方,哪里的书5元一斤.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=370981
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-23 16:34:50

烤鲫鱼也不错啊.