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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-07 16:31:09

诗写很理性,有意味,欣赏.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-07 16:32:45

精彩的一个诗写,欣赏,学习.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-07 16:33:52

诗写有着淡淡的伤感,不过,诗意很好,欣赏..

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-07 16:36:05

对人字的诗意的诠释，很精彩，借鉴！

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-07 16:37:21

青春中有诗歌，生命中就增添一份华彩；诗歌中有青春，诗歌就增添一份激情。来自诗人的创造，彰显诗歌的荣光。

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-07 16:39:29

感谢作者的精彩呈现,问好!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 15:49:33

好一组厚重的诗篇，感谢诗人的精彩呈现！

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 15:53:34

诗写不错,有诗意,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 15:53:34

诗写不错,有诗意,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 15:54:47

编者按写的很中肯,读了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 16:02:04

不过,感觉后面两节写的散文化偏重了些.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 16:04:31

有自己的诗风总是好的.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 16:06:25

诗人善于捕捉诗意,这一点我得向你借鉴.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 16:16:37

树,乃是真正的顶天立地.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-15 16:18:24

诗里弥漫的一种气息让人缱绻.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-16 16:30:08

诗风轻快,明亮,欣赏.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-16 16:29:12

系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=369188
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-16 16:31:43

系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html />　　 欢迎来到江山,期待更多精彩呈现.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-16 16:36:17

诗歌很美,有诗意.问诗人好,欢迎来到江山.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-16 16:36:17

诗歌很美,有诗意.问诗人好,欢迎来到江山.