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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:20:06

联想丰富的诗作,读过.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:21:42

这接洽地气的诗写,带来美不胜收的朴质美,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:24:45

诗人的这个作品诗风很有朝气,清新一片,喜欢.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=369714
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:25:48

这组作品是写的很好,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:26:58

感情丰富的表达,读过.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:28:08

恬淡的人生,这美美的心境.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:30:35

历史情怀的写意,总能带来厚重的诗家艺术.欣赏.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=369756
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:32:06

在押韵上,似乎还是有些不足之处,但诗意的空间已经打开得很好了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=369753
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:36:57

挺优美的文笔,欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:38:59

这是一个好文,有语意,有深思.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=369684
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:40:21

熟悉的乡村风景,远去了的乡村事物.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:41:24

游记写意甚美,必是精品之作,欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:42:59

一个个悠长的句子,挺有意味.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:44:28

一读文题,也觉得三分的温暖之美.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:45:44

潼关,充满了历史底蕴,或许可以写的再丰满些的.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:46:42

这题目拟的甚好,富有诗意了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=369722
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:48:35

我也养过蚕,没蚕叶的时候就让蚕吃莴笋叶,蚕也喜欢吃莴笋叶的.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:50:57

这也是一番自己的秋意心境吧.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:52:03

西部,一定会给人带来心灵的震撼吧?

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:54:37

这真挚的感情和写意,那些情,点燃着青春...