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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-16 16:41:09

“只有，先在心中修篱种菊/　才会有，采菊东篱的悠然/”一句非常有新意,喜欢.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-16 16:42:28

青春中有诗歌，生命中就增添一份华彩；诗歌中有青春，诗歌就增添一份激情。来自诗人的创造，彰显诗歌的荣光。

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-16 17:08:54

作者的作品总有些些坚毅的力量.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:36:05

不说沧桑,不言疼痛,这便是从容啊.喜欢那句.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:37:08

系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:40:14

这流淌的秋意,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:41:22

诗作可以再洗练一点.问好.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:42:37

轻盈的诗写,曼妙的诗意,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:45:37

诗作有思考,有意义.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:47:29

比较有话题性的作品,汗,这个似乎很少有人诗写.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:49:02

诗风非常清秀,不错的写意.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:50:39

诗题很大,作品或许可以写厚重一些的.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:52:08

述说很厚实,诗意甚是丰富,欣赏了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:53:39

情义浓郁的诗篇,读了.

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:57:13

这组诗作不错啊,写出了精彩.

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4 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:57:13

这组诗作不错啊,写出了精彩.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=368979
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 15:58:39

青春中有诗歌，生命中就增添一份华彩；诗歌中有青春，诗歌就增添一份激情。来自诗人的创造，彰显诗歌的荣光。

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=369201
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 16:00:24

诗作有蕴意,值得细细回味.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 16:01:26

这个冬天我开始预谋幸福,这样的诗题挺好的哦.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-17 16:03:28

诗写挺细腻,情意很浓郁的作品.欣赏了.