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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:55:52

矜持的爱,是不好,太矜持,就要错过了.不错的文章.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:56:38

有道是,兄弟相逢三碗酒.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-18 16:58:01

有人说,一想到母亲,就有一种要流泪的感觉,想必作者也会有次感受吧.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:00:16

一组好诗歌,有些句子让人灵感再现.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:01:13

系统作品要求押韵的,不过,感觉这个作品很好,还是推荐一下.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:02:12

欢迎来到江山,期待诗人更多精彩.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:03:32

感谢诗人一直的支持,祝创作更进.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:04:18

景物的描绘甚是美,欣赏.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:05:11

有思考的诗歌便是好诗歌,读了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:05:11

有思考的诗歌便是好诗歌,读了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:08:05

这小小的诗情,欣赏了.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:09:14

诗写挺好的,顶一下.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:10:17

精彩的遣词艺术和效果,学习了.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:11:17

在押韵上似乎有些不足啊.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:12:02

韵律挺好的一个作品,欣赏了.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:14:36

我忽然也想念外婆了.......

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:15:53

编者的按写的也很精彩.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:16:42

这个作品文笔挺好的,关注作者.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=369812
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:18:21

最后几句,到底是春光灿烂还是舂光灿烂?

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-19 16:19:05

诗意很好,有学习的空间.