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5 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-04 16:34:38

一篇有内涵的文章,问作者好.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-04 16:36:17

山村菜农的辛苦,城市人几个知呢.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-04 16:37:20

有的人已经死了,但还活着.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-05 16:44:10

欢迎来到江山,期待诗人更多精彩.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-05 16:45:25

诗人有一个丰富而湿润的内心世界.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-05 16:46:32

诗写还是不错的,押韵似乎有点勉强.系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-05 16:47:25

熟悉的作者,感谢带来精彩的诗意.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-05 16:48:51

最欣赏第四首,评说精湛.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-05 16:49:48

诗人的写作越来越有水准了,实力锋芒显露.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-05 16:51:29

诉说很投入,或许应该加强一下诗意上的拓展.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:18:32

阁老的诗风格一贯的清美,十分赏心.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:16:34

轻美的一首歌词,欣赏.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:33:39

看上去写意很散,但文字还是挺好的.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:35:12

形象深刻的刻画,很感人的文字.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:35:38

精致,简练的一个文章,欣赏.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:36:46

这笔下的叶子,既是品秋,也是品人生.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:37:39

深有同感,音乐无痕,却最能洗涤心情.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:40:56

黄冈是个好地方.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:41:30

作者的文字挺好,关注一下.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-11-09 15:42:34

每听过这种茶,一定是很好喝的茶吧.