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2013-11-10 16:45:42
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=375890 秋雨湿润了诗人一颗秋心. |
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铁禾
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2013-11-10 16:45:56
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=375877 温情的诗写,文字简而不单. |
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2013-11-10 16:46:09
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=375881 静守岁月,这个词用得甚好. |
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铁禾
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2013-11-11 16:09:39
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376440 系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html |
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2013-11-11 16:09:59
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376430 诗作充满人生沉淀的白. |
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2013-11-11 16:10:16
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376427 温情脉脉的一首诗歌,欣赏. |
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2013-11-11 16:10:32
http://www.vsread.com/article-376445.html 有生命方有诗歌，生命因诗歌而美丽；有江山方有诗人，江山因诗人而多娇！祝创作更进，期待呈现更多精彩！ |
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2013-11-12 17:00:45
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376725 1 楼 文友：铁禾 2013-11-12 16:58:28
"流窜"一词似乎用得不怎么好,"历史正在上演"改为"一直在上演"是不是更好些,个见.
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2013-11-12 17:01:14
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376722 1 楼 文友：铁禾 2013-11-12 16:59:29
“诗人对于宇宙人生，须入乎其内，又须出乎其外。入乎其内，故能写之；出乎其外，故能观之。入乎内，故有生气；出乎外，故有高效。”这是王国维对诗人创作修养的理想要求，摘来和文友分享一下。
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2013-11-12 17:01:40
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376709 1 楼 文友：铁禾 2013-11-12 17:00:02
简单的诗写,真诗永远朴实.
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2013-11-13 16:25:36
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376990 好一首民族风情的歌,且让我们一起唱响. |
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2013-11-13 16:26:24
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376994 温情的表达,在韵律上可以再润色一些. |
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2013-11-13 16:26:40
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=376997 系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html,祝创作更进! |
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2013-11-13 16:26:54
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=377003 精彩的一个诗作,个人非常喜欢.问好作者! |
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2013-11-13 16:27:09
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=377014 感伤的诗作,让人心沉沉的. |
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2013-11-13 16:27:25
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=377020 觉得诗题与作品内容有些出入,是不是作者弄错了. |
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2013-11-13 16:27:38
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=377024 祝创作更进,精彩更多. |
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2013-11-13 16:27:53
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=377026 诗歌源于生活的反射,期待诗人有精彩的大作呈现! |
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2013-11-15 16:21:30
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=377532
1 楼 文友：铁禾 2013-11-15 16:13:08 柔软的诗,真上躺在上面. |
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2013-11-15 16:21:47
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=377529
1 楼 文友：铁禾 2013-11-15 16:14:08 诗语也富有余香,欣赏. |
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