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【荷塘絮语】山的高度

2014-10-15 19:05:10

 

                                                                                   我不知道山有多高,
                                                                                   更不知道海有多广,
                                                                                   山与海的疑问
                                                                                   挂满我所有思绪的眼帘,
                                                                                   飘逸的风,俊美的山
                                                                                   舒卷了南北两岸,
                                                                                   起伏的海
                                                                                   壮丽了多少豪放的诗篇。
                                                                                   美荡今夕,月挂天边,
                                                                                   一抹抹彩虹上的影子
                                                                                   把花边上思绪
                                                                                   带到很远很远,
                                                                                   当岁月不再沉思,
                                                                                   当凝固的思想
                                                                                   不再飘散
                                                                                   心,仍就挂着最初的影子
                                                                                   在山水里游动
                                                                                   在云雾中呢喃
                                                                                   飘荡的游丝
                                                                                   缠绕着缭绕的思绪,
                                                                                   飘零的枫叶
                                                                                   咀嚼着飄临的心语,
                                                                                   缭乱了山风,凌乱了山影,
                                                                                   我的心 
                                                                                   浓缩在最初的圆点上寻觅,
                                                                                   每当寂寞的时候
                                                                                   便于那个寂寞的影子
                                                                                   编织未来畅谈过去
                                                                                   曾无数次
                                                                                   在人生的扉页上挂上风铃,
                                                                                   未来的梦
                                                                                   依旧寄生在未来的世纪,
                                                                                   浮云千载,何年何夕?

                                                                                   月牵着你的思想
                                                                                   在天边游荡,
                                                                                   风牵着我的影子                                                                                 

                                                                                   在魔灵中迂回
                                                                                   黄土地上苍茫一片
                                                                                   大自然在孤漠的落叶上
                                                                                   撰写着
                                                                                   苍白无力的语言
                                                                                   秋 
                                                                                   就暂且先让我聆听花落的声音。
                                                                                   春
                                                                                   请暂且让我倾听花开的语言。 
                         

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2014-10-16 15:06:21

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           谢谢妹妹夸奖,这只是我人生的感悟罢了,真正能读懂它的没有几个,谢谢妹妹,向你问好。

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2014-10-16 15:23:28

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           谢谢雨荷妹妹鼓励,一般的人肯定会把这首诗与情爱联系到一起,其实完全不是,我最崇拜的诗人是徐志摩,我跟他学的,对我来说只是一种单纯的表现手法 ,  向你问好我们相互学习

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