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【荷塘絮语】怀念

2014-11-09 18:38:03

 

                                                             梦 
                                                             似醒未醒 
                                                             努力地闭着眼 
                                                             却无力把梦中的你 
                                                             重演  
                                                             你 
                                                             若天边的云彩 
                                                             绝不会飘然 
                                                             在我张开的  
                                                             胸怀 
                                                             如我 
                                                             清醒在阳光里 
                                                             就再没有关于 
                                                             怀念过去的你 
                                                             丝丝缕缕 
                                                             只是为何 
                                                             不想睁开 
                                                             已经湿润的 
                                                             双眼 

                                                                                 

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2014-11-09 19:37:20

信笔涂鸦君莫笑!

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2014-11-09 22:25:37
谢梅雪姐姐鼓励,我的小作还很直白,很幼稚,要继续努力!
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2014-11-21 20:40:00

谢谢清风大哥的鼓励!

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2014-11-21 20:40:47
谢潮仙文友的关注,谢谢!
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