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2012-08-09 17:17:10
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239901 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:16:39
可见诗人娴熟的遣词手法.赞叹!
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2012-08-09 17:19:34
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239897 4 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:19:10
这个似乎有点流水了,没简练感.
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2012-08-09 17:21:41
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239893 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:21:10
一片白云阳照紫,扯来做被满身香.
----- 好句,好句!
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2012-08-09 17:23:42
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239888 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:23:19
读此等诗篇,足不出户也能游山水之乐.
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2012-08-09 17:25:59
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239886 4 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:25:33
好几个细腻韵美的词!再读一遍.
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2012-08-09 17:29:08
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239881 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:28:45
运动员们多夺金,乐得诗人竞即兴.
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2012-08-09 17:31:33
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239880 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:31:08
工整的律诗,意境开阔,柔情的诗意表达,欣赏!
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2012-08-09 17:33:34
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239859 1 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:33:12
古文也可以写得这般紧凑,欣赏,赞叹!
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2012-08-09 17:35:15
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239813 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:34:51
这个素材如果写散文,那将是不错的手笔!
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2012-08-09 17:36:59
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239687 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:36:36
嘿嘿,不是说有图么,怎么没看到呢~~
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2012-08-09 17:38:58
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239681 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:38:36
山水乃地上之文章,诗人都一一捕捉到了,拜服!
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2012-08-09 17:40:58
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239678 4 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:40:35
倒很有哲理的作品了,再读.
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2012-08-09 17:42:18
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239645 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:41:49
缥缈的思绪,丰富的诗意想像,赞!
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2012-08-09 17:43:45
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239628 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:43:25
作品若再渗透一些历史进去或许更佳.
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2012-08-09 17:46:29
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239625 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:46:05
呵呵,南海问题,诗人是主战派.
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2012-08-09 17:48:21
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239623 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:48:00
古韵还是应该写严谨一些为好.
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2012-08-09 17:49:44
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239620 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:49:19
最后一首最后几句似乎还可以斟酌斟酌.
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2012-08-09 17:51:41
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239610 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:51:19
为没拿到金牌的选手可惜,没有鲜花没有焦聚.
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2012-08-09 17:53:24
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2012-08-09 17:54:51
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=239160 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-09 05:54:27
优美清秀的古韵,欣赏,问候.
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