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2012-08-16 00:18:17
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=242010 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-16 12:17:52
各有所好嘛!没听说过"白天是教授,晚上是禽兽"的么.
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2012-08-16 00:20:41
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=241904 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-16 12:20:12
"考虑"这个词也很经典,一句"我考虑考虑",足以打发许多麻烦.
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2012-08-17 00:08:10
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=206388 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:07:14
小说源于现实，只有人名是假的，它给读者带来一种震撼心灵的力量。
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2012-08-17 00:10:30
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=206636 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:10:07
对古典历史的发挥也是很到位,赞.
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2012-08-17 00:12:11
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=206713 6 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:11:46
有希望总是好的,作品带来了思考性的东西.
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2012-08-17 00:17:24
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=207478 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:17:04
真是个恶梦啊,有点惊涑的味道.
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2012-08-17 00:29:38
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=242401 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:29:15
细致的解读,理性的思维延伸,这大概就是长智慧的根本.
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2012-08-17 00:34:59
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209452 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:34:38
古体也可以写得这般精彩，似乎有些句子够得上名句。赞!
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2012-08-17 00:36:56
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209458 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:36:32
<月>之一首,动象颇大,再读.
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2012-08-17 00:40:07
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209468 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:39:41
对人物的理性的合理的评价,以及形象的还原都很到位.欣赏.
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2012-08-17 00:42:01
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209473 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:41:37
作者各种形式都表达娴熟,足见深厚的古韵功底.拜服.
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2012-08-17 00:43:47
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209522 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:43:19
134和135两首比较经典,欣赏之.
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2012-08-17 00:45:22
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209527 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:45:04
呵呵,瞧这山歌唱的,山青水秀.
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2012-08-17 00:48:15
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209532 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:47:54
个人觉得,《悯农》一首的对比对象似乎不合适，不妨参考古诗《悯农》。
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2012-08-17 00:52:19
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209541 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:49:48
三国之争倒是写的大气磅礴,最后一个似乎纯模仿.
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2012-08-17 00:52:44
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209544 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:52:00
好一首麦磨岩,绘声绘色,写意细腻.欣赏.
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2012-08-17 00:55:17
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209549 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:54:56
千古帝王,昏昏明明,仅于后人说.
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2012-08-17 00:56:48
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209556 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 12:56:27
最后一个多字似乎用的不妥,用个动词或许更有美感.
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2012-08-17 01:00:25
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209779 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 01:00:00
诗句其实也可以再历练历练,个见.
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2012-08-17 01:02:13
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209787 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-17 01:01:51
古三字经,新三字经,现在又读到自创三字经,各有千秋,有意思,有意义.
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