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★：铁禾2012年8月评论2012-08-01 23:11:55http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=237973 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-01 11:11:16
精彩的《浮世》，精彩的赏析，祝愿征文在大赛中胜出。
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2012-08-01 23:22:40
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=238021 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-01 11:22:06
下层人的反抗比上层人的反抗更利落.
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2012-08-01 23:47:33
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=237704 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-01 11:47:06
诗作有着小草一样的力量.
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2012-08-01 23:49:25
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=237196 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-01 11:49:03
诗作应当再洗练洗练才好!
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2012-08-02 23:37:21
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2012-08-02 23:40:08
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2012-08-02 23:42:31
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=238316 1 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-02 11:42:07
总算见到一位文坛和仕途都得意的文学大家了.
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2012-08-03 23:26:58
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=238553 1 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-03 11:25:31
欧阳修被贬滁州的时候,写了一篇<醉翁亭记>,作者应该发挥一下.
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2012-08-03 23:34:25
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=238158 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-03 11:34:01
可以理解,毕竟赶稿子嘛,要趁热,快就不新鲜了.一急就要出点漏子.
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2012-08-03 23:37:30
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=238231 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-03 11:37:06
我越来越发觉,强国是重来不把历史条约放在眼里的.
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2012-08-03 23:39:01
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=238522 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-03 11:38:32
考试满分不如做人及格.
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2012-08-03 23:51:58
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=238579 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-03 11:51:38
好的电影对我们的人生有一种指引.
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2012-08-04 22:47:29
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=238802 1 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-04 10:46:20
文中提到的那首<鹧鸪天>我十分欣赏.
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2012-08-05 22:54:11
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=208911 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-05 10:53:17
自由的诗意表达，我沿着诗人的思路游走诗人的世界。
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2012-08-05 23:11:48
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209340 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-05 11:11:26
有韵律,只是渲染太淡了点,加油.
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2012-08-05 23:13:50
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209333 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-05 11:13:26
诗作情感很深挚,诗意表达上也很到位,欣赏.
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2012-08-05 23:15:31
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209329 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-05 11:15:10
些些的诗句流淌着一股暖意,问好.
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2012-08-05 23:16:56
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=209319 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-05 11:16:26
作品充满诚挚的真善美.
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2012-08-05 23:21:53
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=202421 9 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-05 11:21:23
精致的古体，用字很是精炼，可见宽畅的诗意，欣赏，问好诗人！
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2012-08-05 23:26:52
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=202730 3 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-05 11:26:18
比较喜欢<秋凉>那首.赞.
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2012-08-05 23:28:52
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=202617 2 楼 文友：铁禾 2012-08-05 11:28:29
写景抒情,寓情于景,为好的篇章顶.
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