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1 楼        文友：若云        2012-09-21 09:48:20

　　春天的美好的，春天之桃花更是艳丽迷人！作者为我们展现了一副绚丽的桃花图，让人心旷神怡！祝作者创作愉快，期待更多的佳作问世！问好！

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3 楼        文友：若云        2012-09-21 10:02:16

记叙详细生动，笔墨流畅生风，佳朋聚会流诗韵，笑语满云空！赏学佳作！问好！

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1 楼        文友：若云        2012-09-22 11:55:27

　　欣赏一组佳作！祝作者创作愉快！期待佳作连连！问好！

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2 楼        文友：若云        2012-09-22 12:00:20

　　欣赏佳作！问好作者，祝创作愉快！问好！