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★:铁禾2013年6月评论2013-06-02 14:38:12
铁禾2013年6月评论汇总。
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2013-06-02 14:42:09
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=333960 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2013-06-02 14:41:19
毫无疑问,这几个诗作都很出彩,学习了.
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2013-06-02 14:46:12
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=333904 2 楼 文友:铁禾 2013-06-02 14:45:47
第二首比较有意蕴,喜欢了.
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2013-06-03 15:18:14
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=19618 6 楼 文友:铁禾 2013-06-03 15:17:05
岸边千年岩层/那是情感的积淀/在浪涛的咀嚼下/苍老得无法拾起那沉甸甸的厚重/
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2013-06-03 15:20:47
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2013-06-03 15:29:37
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=19857 5 楼 文友:铁禾 2013-06-03 15:29:10
爱的路很短,思念的旅途很长。
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2013-06-05 16:27:10
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=21950 8 楼 文友:铁禾 2013-06-05 16:26:43
仰首见弯月抱定了星辰,就永远了天空的幸福.好句.
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2013-06-06 15:16:49
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=334982 拜访老人,也是拜访智慧. |
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2013-06-06 15:17:08
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=334961 发现你的文字很不错,比较喜欢,关注一下. |
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2013-06-06 15:17:21
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=334989 若是人间惆怅客,何须往事泪纵横.美妙的主题. |
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2013-06-06 15:17:36
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335006 难得还有这么一个优美的地方,那是生物的幸甚. |
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2013-06-06 15:17:51
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335125 好一个童心长驻. |
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2013-06-06 15:18:05
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335132 女人如水,水能载舟也能覆舟,女人也是很有力量的. |
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2013-06-06 15:18:23
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335077 军人身上的气质,动人,他们是可爱的人.
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2013-06-06 15:19:11
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335114 怠,本就一个邪恶的词,是要战胜之. |
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2013-06-06 15:19:28
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335137 阅读着感情真挚的文章,我也想起我的爷爷来了.
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2013-06-06 15:19:41
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=335147 书写的很有底蕴,读过. |
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2013-06-06 16:59:22
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=22265 8 楼 文友:铁禾 2013-06-06 16:27:41 这片土地曾经相当肥沃/生长的贫穷又肥又大/这片土地曾经十分贫瘠/生长的希望又瘦又小/ |
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2013-06-06 16:59:40
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=22376 6 楼 文友:铁禾 2013-06-06 16:51:35 风,用笔抒写冬天/用洁白的雪打探,春天还有多远/” |
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2013-06-07 15:43:30
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=334258 青春风采的时代,有笑有泪.这很正常. |
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2013-06-07 15:43:44
http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=334411 读书不是读死书,一本书要读其精华. |
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