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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:36:55

年轻,那美好的时代.

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3 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:37:32

真是一碗好凉粉.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:40:04

等弄明白问题了,黄花菜也凉了....

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:41:26

这的确是冬天的恩赐.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:42:25

红楼梦蕴藏丰富的能量,真是丰富的文化资源.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:43:01

有梦想,不言老.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:43:54

走着走着就老了,这题目让人几许伤感..

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:45:33

黑夜里写的诗,有营养,有味.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:46:43

看闲庭花开花落,人生开始完整.这意境甚美.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-25 16:49:35

邹平本身挺好,只是觉得作品在分行上太碎了些,有些句子本身很完整的,分行反而有些影响情感上的表达.尊重原作原意,小编不好修改.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-26 16:58:00

朴实的文字,深厚的写意,问好诗人!

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-26 16:59:31

呵呵,有幸编到诗人的美作,幸甚!

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-26 17:00:08

充满阳光的诗作,欣赏!

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-26 17:01:12

诗写也有淡淡的感伤,有感伤的作品总有让人温情之处.

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2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-26 17:01:53

诗写也有一种独到的清香呢,问好阁老.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:50:30

有些说理值得我们凝思,思考.

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:44:15

论质地，这个作品似乎应该在立意上再深刻一番就好了。

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:28:11

系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html

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1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:28:25

系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html

http://www.vsread.com/article-372311.html
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:28:53

诗小诗意妙,欣赏.