http://www.vsread.com/article-372309.html
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:27:46

作品格式很是有点乱,小编给重新做了排版,另外,这些小诗以组诗的形式发稿最好,故给冠以组诗之名,感谢诗人的精彩佳作.

http://www.vsread.com/article-372295.html
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:54:09

有生命方有诗歌，生命因诗歌而美丽；有江山方有诗人，江山因诗人而多娇！

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=372306
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:53:34

有生命方有诗歌，生命因诗歌而美丽；有江山方有诗人，江山因诗人而多娇！

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=372287
2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-27 16:55:15

每个诗人有一个丰富而湿润的内心世界，有一颗敏感的心灵，而诗是解读心灵密码最好的钥匙。做诗人是幸福的，向诗人心怀敬意，致以问候。

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=372603

1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-28 15:43:31

 

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=372598

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=372598

1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-28 15:44:32

 

http://www.vsread.com/article-372593.html

1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-28 15:47:13

 

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=372898
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-29 16:11:27

赏心悦目的诗篇,再读一遍.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=372887
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-29 16:13:02

喜欢诗人这丰富而湿润的抒情手笔.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=372880
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-29 16:14:14

种菜种下的心思,长出的是美好的想望.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373172
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-30 15:57:26

欢迎来到江山,感谢诗人的精彩诗歌.
系统诗歌栏目的基本规范要求，请诗人参考：http://www.vsread.com/bbs/topic-9074-126127.html

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373168
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-30 15:58:44

这一片拈诗绣心的情怀.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373150
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-30 16:00:51

有几个句子真是写意美妙.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373127

2 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-30 16:08:28

 

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373422
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-31 16:25:34

放下装满心事的行囊,暂且浮生.鉴赏这句.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373430
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-31 16:29:08

诗写还好,只是中间几节押韵有点没跟上.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373442
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-31 16:30:26

请诗人注意一下押韵,这也是系统诗歌栏目的要求.问好了.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373450
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-31 16:32:00

诗写的是夜,诗中出现的白云似乎有点不合作品里的意境,个见.

http://www.vsread.com/index.php/article/showread?id=373454
1 楼        文友：铁禾        2013-10-31 16:38:57

有生命方有诗歌，生命因诗歌而美丽；有江山方有诗人，江山因诗人而多娇！